Saturday, 4 February 2012

Haiku Challenge Day #4







A Guilt Inside
Of not Loving himTrue
The Innocent he



Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 4 – February 4th – Theme: Opposite Emotions

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16 comments:

Amber said...

Strong one! Liked it! :)

br!nDle said...

@Amber...Thank You...(:

Gemma Wiseman said...

Innocence sometimes does not know the guilt on the other side! Delightful!

Someone is Special said...

A different take on the prompt.. Loved it..

Someone is Special

Grace said...

Nice contrast of innocence and guilt ~

br!nDle said...

@Gemma...Thanx...(:

@Someone is Special...Thank You...(:

@Grace...Thanks...(:

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Pranali Kadam said...

Haiku goes perfectly with the image!
Excellent.

becca givens said...

Nice opposites ~~ well done!

Chèvrefeuille said...

Very strong one, the verse and the picture making it wonderful.

Lilly said...

haiku indeed - and loyal to the theme :) nicely done!

Simran said...

The feeling of pain in lost is nicely expressed here !

Karen said...

Well done!

Ramesh Sood said...

This is beautiful..

Ramesh Sood said...

This is beautiful..

Vijender : said...

very pure n reviving ... :)
cheers!

br!nDle said...

@Pranali...Thank you...(:

@becca...Thank you ma'am...:)

@Chevrefeuille...Your comment is adding to it's beauty...:)

@Lily...Thanks...:):)

@Simran...M glad it touched you...:)

@Karen...Thanx...:)

@Ramesh...Thank you...:)

@Vijender...Cheers to you too...;)
Thanx...:):)