Wednesday, 1 February 2012

Expectations....



 
None but the one you love
owes you his heart...

None but the one you marry
lends you his soul...

None but the one you kiss
remembers you forever...


None but the one you mercy
treats you with mildness...

None but the one you care
Promises  his devotion...

None but the one you trust
keeps your secret's safe...

None but the one you defeat
tries harder for victory...

None but the one you murder
revenges for his soul...

None but the one you expect
fulfills your expectations... 


Copyright © 2012 by br!ndle
 
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21 comments:

Vijender : said...

well.. A genuine, apt and meaningful verse...
personally my favourite one - None but the one you kiss remembers you forever.. :)

So nice... keep going..

br!nDle said...

@Vijender...Thnx a lot...ur comments means a lot...:):)

Ms. Capricious said...

So very true .. There is always 'none but the one' in everyone's life ..So beautifully captured in simple words ! :):)

br!nDle said...

@Ms. Capricious....Thanx a ton...:)

Aditya said...

Beautiful lines brindle..:)

br!nDle said...

@Aditya...Thanx...:)

Susie Clevenger said...

So much wisdom here

Chèvrefeuille said...

I love this poem. As Susie says "full of wisdom", but also ... a touch of spirituality.

Namaste

booguloo said...

None but the one loves you.

~L said...

whoa! That was some powerful lines! Great poetry!

br!nDle said...

@Susie...Thank you so much...:):)

@Chevrefeuille...:)Thnx...:)

@booguloo...:):)

@~L...thank you...:)

Andy said...

Hello.
Very expressive poem.
Enjoyed reading.
Thanks for sharing.

No Anguish Or Pain

br!nDle said...

@Andy...Thanx...:)

ZQ said...

One of the nicest pieces so far :-)

Yajnaa said...

This is it. Its for all of us. We all expect- then we want others to live upto us, or we live upto others or we choose to do neither. :)

fieryreddays said...

a very honest piece in simple words. loved it.

sajeevkmenon said...

A nice play of words and emotions:)

Belva Rae Staples said...

This is a wonderful piece filled with wisdom!

dakshi said...

Heartfelt...

David Rheins said...

not sure I agree with the "none but the one you marry" part :_/

br!nDle said...

@David...I will try rethinking over that part sir...Thank you for you views...and do visit again...Would love to hear from you in future...:)